The Dog
Never spoke a word
Yet we knew each other well
The turmoil of pain
When those joyful eyes left me
Your spot in your bed, empty
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Never spoke a word
Yet we knew each other well
The turmoil of pain
When those joyful eyes left me
Your spot in your bed, empty
Good poem! I like it :)
I would recommend adding commas to the end of lines that are dependent clauses (if you don’t know what that is, you can look it up), so the poem flows/looks better. Anyways, good job :D
