STORY STARTER
Write about an argument that occurs during a King’s feast.
Whether you write this as a fantasy world, a past era, or a hint at a real-life scene, what directions could you take this scenario in?
STORY STARTER
Write about an argument that occurs during a King’s feast.
Whether you write this as a fantasy world, a past era, or a hint at a real-life scene, what directions could you take this scenario in?
First off, medium-rare is gross, lol. I like how you started the story off with the presence of undercooked meat and ended it that's as as well — a nice way to tie everything together.
One thing I think could make the writing better would be if you went more into depth on the heir's relationship with his parents. This would mean just weaving more hints to the prince's parents intentions and nature. I was getting heavy notes of manipulation and guilt-tripping (and wish these notes were present consistently) when his mother tells him, "I just want what's best for you . . . you know that, don't you?" Being new here, I don't know about word limits or anything, so perhaps you were restricted in what you could get out.
You can't say much about a very short story under something like a thousand words, but the little that I am able to see of your writing is great. I love how you took the prompt of a simple argument at the table and spinned it on its head, taking it outside of the dining room and maneuvering it in order to build the conflicting characters of the prince and his parents. Very fine job.