POEM STARTER

Awakening

Write a poem about an awakening - it could be literal or metaphorical.

2/10/2025

I never sleep in the car, but I remember how calm you made me.


I woke up because I snored.


You were listening to a podcast so low I don’t know how you could even hear it.


“You weren’t asleep long.”

“I never sleep in the car.”


The stars were bright as the desert flew by us.

Sagebrush

Creosote

Dust


I felt so calm, surrounded by red dirt and wide wide space.


“We’ll stop at the next town. Maybe 20 minutes.”


I drink some water and stare out the window as the big dipper smiled at me.


I could live forever in this car.

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