VISUAL PROMPT
by Ricarda Wegmann @ deviantart.com/yumenoki

Your character is heading towards this dark tower. Tell the story of what happens here...
VISUAL PROMPT
by Ricarda Wegmann @ deviantart.com/yumenoki
Your character is heading towards this dark tower. Tell the story of what happens here...
I think this is a good start (or middle) to a longer work. It’s kind of like a teaser: it adds intrigue and makes the reader ask what this ritual sacrifice is for, why Jenny knows about it, and why she finds herself at the tower in the first place.
I think it would be nice to add a little more visuals in certain parts. Eg, instead of saying just “tall, dark and eerie,” maybe you can sprinkle in smaller bits of detail as Jenny approaches it—things that will add to the “dark”-ness of it: pointed turrets, grotesque gargoyles, tangled shrubbery? Are the floors disjointed so the tower looks like it’s about to collapse?
Same goes for the figure’s grotesque face: what specific features make it grotesque? Is it wrinkled, shrivelled? Does it have only 1 eye or huge craters in its skin?
Bits and pieces like that can add to the overall eeriness of the piece ime :)
This is so good! I love the imagery and use of descriptive language!