STORY STARTER
Inspired by 'no name'
"Everyone here is alive because of them."
"Everyone here is dead because of them."
Use either of theses pieces of speech in a story in any genre.
STORY STARTER
Inspired by 'no name'
"Everyone here is alive because of them."
"Everyone here is dead because of them."
Use either of theses pieces of speech in a story in any genre.
Thank you for the constructive criticism! I enjoyed reading your comments, thank you for giving me suggestions on how I could make it better, I will definitely be using your suggestions!
Hello! Intriguing story! I would suggest to break up the dialogue between the protagonist and the voice. As well as using less question marks (just a suggestion, ignore if it’s your way of adding flare to your writing). Other than that it’s a good story and could very well turn into a novel.
Hi. Like the writing you wrote! It’s very intriguing, though the only thing I would say would be to space out the top part. Little more broken up. But besides that, it was wonderfuln