STORY STARTER
Submitted by by Laura Melvin
"I think I just met the happiest person in the world!"
Write a scene or story which begins with this piece of speech.
STORY STARTER
Submitted by by Laura Melvin
"I think I just met the happiest person in the world!"
Write a scene or story which begins with this piece of speech.
This was genuinely lovely and lighthearted to read! The use of the prompt was really well done and you did a great job turning out a short scene about self-expression and friendship! I’m not an experienced writer, so I’m not sure how I’d discuss the pace, although it felt fairly natural, and the progressions from beat to beat felt pretty sensical. I think the only thing that struck me was the ending, which felt a slight bit rushed with how it seemed to abruptly cut to the mom and school reactions. The ending was good and tied the whole story with a nice bow, but maybe another paragraph before the end to ease the energy into it would’ve made it feel less abrupt. Great writing overall! Excellent use of the prompt!