COMPETITION PROMPT
Write a story set in a hospital.
That Was Enough
The hospital smelled of antiseptic and something fainter beneath it, something human—warm skin, fear, the whisper of life on the edge of silence. The air was thick with it, the weight of a hundred unsaid things pressing against the walls, hanging in the quiet spaces between monitors that pulsed like artificial heartbeats.
Dr. Evelyn Carter stood by the window of Room 317, her fingers grazing the chart in her hands, though she had long since memorized its contents. Outside, the sky stretched in a pale, winter-gray expanse, indifferent to the struggle playing out within these walls.
The man in the bed, Samuel Whitmore, had been unconscious for three days. A stroke, sudden and cruel, had stolen his voice and his movement, and now he hovered in that liminal space between staying and going. He was seventy-two, a retired professor of literature, and in the drawer beside his bed, a book of poetry lay open, its pages softened by age and touch.
Evelyn had met his daughter, Claire, on the first day of his admission. She had sat by his bed, spine straight, her fingers curled into the hem of her sweater as though holding herself together stitch by stitch. Grief had already begun to settle in her, though she did not yet wear its full weight.
Now, as Evelyn stood in the doorway, Claire looked up, her eyes dark pools of exhaustion. “Any change?”
Evelyn hesitated. “His vitals are stable.” A careful answer, neither cruel nor falsely hopeful.
Claire exhaled, the breath unsteady. “My father used to say there are entire worlds in the spaces between words.” She glanced at the book beside her. “Now all we have is the space between breaths.”
Evelyn had spent years perfecting the art of detachment, of holding grief at arm’s length. But something in Claire’s voice—an aching, fragile reverence—stirred something old and long-buried. She stepped closer. “May I sit?”
Claire nodded.
For a while, they sat in silence, interrupted only by the rhythmic beeping of the monitors. The world outside continued on, indifferent, while inside this room, time had become something elastic, stretching and folding in on itself.
Then—so slight it could have been imagined—a shift. A flicker beneath Samuel’s eyelids. A tremor in his fingers, barely there.
Claire’s breath caught. “Dad?”
A sound, thin as a whisper of wind through dry leaves. His lips parted, and though no words came, the effort was there, the desperate, defiant act of a man reaching across the void.
Claire was already leaning forward, her hand closing over his. “I’m here, Dad. I’m here.”
Evelyn stood, stepping back, giving them space. There was nothing more she could do now. The rest was up to him—to time, to chance, to whatever unseen force lay between this life and whatever came after.
As she turned to leave, she caught sight of the open book on the nightstand. A line underlined in delicate, fading ink:
“And though the night is vast, I am not afraid. For even in the silence, love remains.”
Evelyn closed her eyes for a moment, then stepped into the hall, where the world continued its quiet, relentless motion. But in Room 317, between heartbeats, something had shifted.
And that was enough.