WRITING OBSTACLE

Submitted by Lizzie Rose.

Write a poem or story about fog, steering away from any horror themes.

Usually when we think of fog, our minds come up with a daunting image. Try to make your story/poem beautiful.

I tried

I think fog is beautiful, so let me try-


Swirling mists of hope

coalescing to form a figure

She reaches out her hand to me

And I take it

It is soft and cool to the touch

Tendrils of fog wrap around me and they

start to pull me in

and suddenly the figure is

A giant,

hiding in the shadows,

dark and-


Oh, now look what I've done. Let me try again-


Clouds are not solid, they say

I guess that's true

But the feeling of being inside one

is so nice

Like a gentle spray

settling on your hair

the silence making all the fear go away

...

silence

silence

silence

The mist is claustrophobic

I can't breathe

I can't breathe

I am drowning in fog

Someone help me!

But they can't hear me scream

So I run and scream and shout and-


Why can't I get the visions out of my head?

Every time I try it's like

There's something haunting me

I cannot take them away

They are a part of who I am

But let me try one final time-


The mist is neither friend nor foe

The mist has no figure nor walls

It is simply water vapor clinging to itself

Making me see things I wish not to see

And hear things I wish not to hear

Perhaps I over-thought this again

Perhaps the mist

Is simply

Itself

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