POEM STARTER
Write a descriptive poem which portrays a busy city.
You could use metaphors, imagery, and appeal to the senses, to really capture the feel of a city.
POEM STARTER
Write a descriptive poem which portrays a busy city.
You could use metaphors, imagery, and appeal to the senses, to really capture the feel of a city.
Ooh this is good, Ffion. Very descriptive and I like the imagery you built up here. The comparisons between cars and people continues throughout :)
If I were to mention one thing to potentially consider improving, it sometimes feels a little too abstract to truly understand what’s going on. The red, yellow and green, for example, I assume are references to traffic lights but I gathered that through the colours. Perhaps grounding your excellent imagery with some really tangible elements would make the piece more readable and understandable.
Otherwise, I thoroughly enjoyed it :)