The moon in her quiet beauty shone bright in the darkness of the cloudless night.
The meadow where once as lovers we had lain was quiet that night though I tried in vain
To remember the sound of your voice and laughter; to hold onto happily ever after.
But you had gone and left me here to live alone and face loneliness and fear.
The sky full of stars seemed dead and cold; a place once so magical now hurt to behold.
This is lovely! If it’s character development specifically that you want to focus on, you could maybe try to include small, specific details and character quirks, eg crow’s feet around his eyes from smiling too much, the way they always hum a certain song when there’s a lapse in conversation, or maybe having a specific reaction whenever they’re annoyed/surprised etc. Obviously these are just random examples off of the top of my head but these are the types of things I do to try and build a more detailed picture in the reader’s head, as well as giving them something to relate to. Hope this helps :)
