WRITING OBSTACLE
Your characters are caught in a sudden thunderstorm in a forest.
Write a description of this experience, involving the senses as much as possible. Would your characters enjoy, detest or fear this scenario?
Baobab Palace
We grew bored inside
Imprisoned within these grey walls,
mere drizzle acting as our jailor
Naturally, we hatched a scheme to escape.
We waited until we could no longer hear the bullet-like rain on the glass door
And swiftly left our cover
Running through the sloshy grass
Avoiding puddles laid to trap us.
We breached the wall of trees,
the smell of rain fresh in the air
A loud crash in the distance tells us our absence was noticed
And the guard would be swiftly on our tails.
We took shelter in our tree house
The breeze friskily feeling around for any intruders
And while it was certainly safer indoors
The excitement of adventure felt more at home.
Inside our baobab palace
We overlooked the land
Lost in ambitious conversation
Until we saw the birds fly again.
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