WRITING OBSTACLE

You are a child who has lost their favourite toy on a day out, and bedtime is quickly approaching. Describe how this makes you feel.

Consider your language choice carefully here, and the age of the child. How do they display their emotions?

Mr. Neigh Blew Away.

Whenever I slept

I drifted gracefully into sleep.

Now though?

My sleepiness is weak.



I lost my best friend today

Mr. Neigh.

I was out at the Zoo

I saw a cool game and said

“Me wanna play Too!”

So I raced to the stand

And let go of Mr. Neigh.

He blew away!

Away..

Away..



So now?

I cannot sleep.

Because I have not one friend.

I am alone now.

Might as well sleep with the plow.

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