Pride
Treasure what you have
Do not shame, do not humiliate
and do not brag
The wind goes as quickly as it came
Life giveth and life taketh away
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Treasure what you have
Do not shame, do not humiliate
and do not brag
The wind goes as quickly as it came
Life giveth and life taketh away
Hi Allison! Love the little poem you made. I believe it was talking about not being prideful, right?
You’re spelling and grammar look really good to me; it aids with the flow and pace.
The structure too was also fabulous. The first two lines talk about being humble I believe, if humble is the opposite of prideful. The last two talk about the reasons why we shouldn’t be prideful because life is full of uncertainties basically. At least that’s what I got.
The poem does seem to carry much more meaning if thoroughly read through which is also a good thing.
Above all, I think you did a great job. I love how the poem was short and meaningful. It had a nice pace and good flow. Especially your ABACC pattern. Loved every word! Great job! 👍
