STORY STARTER
A wild animal has begun to visit your character's home every day.
Write a short scene about this scenario - it could be friendly, scary, or a surprising interaction.
STORY STARTER
A wild animal has begun to visit your character's home every day.
Write a short scene about this scenario - it could be friendly, scary, or a surprising interaction.
Cute story. I way you described their dependence on each other developed the characters well. I would recommend clearer transitions to differentiate the days. Well done
I love this cute little story. Amazing job :))
I would recommend varying your sentence structure. Including some dependent clauses connected to your independent clauses would help improve the flow and overall reason. You should look into using commas so you can improve!
Overall, I love it <3