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rough seas💙
Simple but powerful
Wowser! With the simple addition of two words, it transforms from a quiet observation into something alive and popping. Before, it was a reflection on external forces—powerful, yes, but distant. And then… BOOM. “They know” hits like lightning. The waters aren’t just passive anymore; they’re aware, conscious of their ebb and flow.
The line suddenly has this depth, this sentient energy that makes the whole piece slay. As I read it, I found myself caught in that moment—almost breathless, waiting for the next revelation. It’s as if the poem is whispering truths we didn’t even realize were there, drawing us in, forcing us to listen, to feel. Thank you Nancy. J/K aside, I like what you did there. 😀
