STORY STARTER
Write a story containing two friends who have very different professions.
Their jobs do not have to be the main theme of the story, but include something that highlights how their roles affect their friendship.
STORY STARTER
Write a story containing two friends who have very different professions.
Their jobs do not have to be the main theme of the story, but include something that highlights how their roles affect their friendship.
You have officially mastered the art of foreshadowing! I applaud you! This is the best short story twist I’ve read yet!
Whoooaaaa Sam! Whooaaaa!! Wow. Why didn’t I see that coming? That was really good. This is a small thing but I’m really impressed by it. “…she placed the phone next to her ear, supporting it with her shoulder.” It’s such a nuanced thing, but I super like that you’ve written it here. The scene needed a mini moment and you executed that brilliantly.
My only note is to put a
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in the spot where you switch characters. It’ll be easier to follow!