WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a scene where two characters discuss a mundane topic, like the weather, but both have hidden agendas.

Use subtext to hint at the underlying motives without stating them explicitly.

Appetite 

Zoya loved taking long walks late at night. Something about the stillness of the town calmed her nerves. As she walked, she heard a voice call out to her. She glanced behind her and saw a man leaning against the wall of a still open bar.

“Can I help you?” she asked.

“It’s a little late for a pretty woman such as yourself to be walking around at night, isn’t it?”

“Is it? I hadn’t really noticed!”

“Yes! There’s all kinds of creeps who could do a woman like you harm!”

“Well, then I’m grateful for a gentleman such as yourself taking an interest in my wellbeing!” Zoya smiled sweetly at him.

“Of course!” He gave a small bow.

“Would you mind walking me home then?”

“It would be my pleasure!”

They started walking in the direction of Zoya’s home.

“I hope you got your fill at the bar?” Zoya asked.

“Yes! Though I must admit, I am still feeling a bit unsatisfied.”

“Well, I’m sure you’ll find something. This great city has things that will satisfy all kinds of appetites!” Zoya smiled mischievously at him.

“I’m starting to see that now.”

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