VISUAL PROMPT
by Sans @ deviantart.com/Sanskarans

Write a halloween horror in less than 10 sentences.
VISUAL PROMPT
by Sans @ deviantart.com/Sanskarans
Write a halloween horror in less than 10 sentences.
The setting is off-putting since she believes she is at a wedding waiting for her lost husband but states that she is at a grave. Well, the wedding could be at the grave, but it's better to say a rundown wedding hall or church.
You should also add something to separate the shift since it's going to be read with the reading before it and become confusing. I have to reread that part to understand that there was a sudden shift there.
The shift from "Still, any moment, he will walk down that isle, ready to wed me with a full heart." to "Soon I will leave this overgrown grave," since it talks about waiting for him and what it will be like after he comes for her.
I also think adding the teenager was a bit random, but I like the idea. Overall, I enjoy it.