STORY STARTER
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The world will burn.
Opening with this line, write a poem or story that also ends with this line having a completely different meaning.
STORY STARTER
Submitted by an anonymous user
The world will burn.
Opening with this line, write a poem or story that also ends with this line having a completely different meaning.
This was SO good. It kept my interest the entire time, and your style of writing is beautiful.
And as soon as it said, “he loved Annabeth Kidman, as he was at her funeral,” I was immediately shocked, which helped a lot to show the tone change, and how much darker things became.
The ending was the slightest bit confusing. After-all, Annabeth had spent her whole life trying to be a firefighter. Nicholas could just be acting in grief when he wants to burn the world, but Annabeth was murdered. It would make more sense if he tried to hunt down whoever killed her, or something like that.
Just a suggestion, though. The story is amazing as it is. I love your writing. 👏👏
Awwww this is so sad and sweet and leaves me wanting so much more to the story. This would be such a cool starter to a story!
Oh... this is so good! The ending leaves a lot for the imagination about what happens later and I would love to read more of this! You have such a great voice and writing style!