POEM STARTER
Write a poem in a different genre to your usual comfort zone.
This poem can be in any style and with any theme, but try to write in a genre that you wouldn't normally try.
POEM STARTER
Write a poem in a different genre to your usual comfort zone.
This poem can be in any style and with any theme, but try to write in a genre that you wouldn't normally try.
I think the story in this is good, at first i like ls the repetition of mad yet man especially in the third stanza felt like it was too much- you could have said ‘she walked over to her creation. The mad man and the man-made lover finally together at last’ or something else to describe him. Other than this i think its amazing and i like the rhetorical questionat the end - ‘will we begin to fall in-love with machines instead of humanity?’