WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a short story or paragraph in passive voice only.

The passive voice places emphasis on the thing rather than the person doing the thing: e.g. “The book was read” rather than “She read the book”.

Things Just Happened To Him

His employability was shattered by AI.


His heart trampled by a bitch.


You could list every broken thing about Jim,


and trace the cause back to some witch.


His confidence was marred by childhood sneers,


His arrogance a self-defence


To the outraging closed minds of that era of peers


that drove him to such immense


depths of despair. What a life! What tragedy,


How the smothering and mothering of his ‘rents*,


Had prevented the rise of a prodigy,


Had been the stifling of his talents.


Now, 43, every broken thing about Jim,


Had built up to ‘irreversible’ heights,


A sigh, what a plight, he was such a poor guy.


Those things just happened to him.


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*’rents = Slang for ‘parents’


Day 3 of my personal writing challenge.

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