My demons come to haunt me,
they inhabit my frail heart.
My pain like an exhibit,
that they all fundraised to start.
It’s dead in here, they lament,
as they shiver in the dark.
Hell freezes over in
my lonely broken heart.
Only 8 lines and I'm blown away. THIS IS INCREDIBLE, WELL DONE👏👏
This is so sad but well written, wow! I have to say, lines 3 and 4 are my favorites but the ending is amazing because I could visualize a frost or a sheet of ice freezing over hell because of how bad the pain is for you. Super good job my friend. Keep up the good work!
