WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a character's internal monologue that includes an example of stream of consciousness.

Stream of consciousness is a literary technique that represents the flow of a character's thoughts and feelings as they occur in real time, without logical order or punctuation.

Presence

You are here.


Yes you are, I felt you walk in the door, the scent of your shampoo travelling through the stale air and I smile.


You are here.


You make your way into the living room, I feel my hands grab a tea bag from the cupboard, flicking the kettle on and hearing your soft steps on the cold floor.


You are here.


The kettle finishes boiling with a click and you kiss the back of my neck.


β€˜Hello Baby’, exits my lips


…


I love you baby πŸ–€

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