WRITING OBSTACLE
Inspired by Amber A
Use the metaphor of a fuse being lit and its impending explosion to represent a mental eruption of a strong emotion.
Consider how you will develop this metaphor with strong visual and emotional representation.
Passion
Butterflies pounding in my chest —
a thumb itching to hit the striker.
Eyes locked —
falling into an endless captivating pool.
Aches and pain
beloved and sought-after sensations
tearing my soul asunder with yearning.
Flesh pressed against flesh,
lips locked,
the fuel bubbling up.
One spark to ignite —
fire.
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