Birthdays

I honestly don’t have a great and complete idea of what a pantoum is but I really tried! Please provide feedback which will probably be needed😅


Childhood cakes with laughter's ring,

Balloons and songs, the joy they bring.

Teenage dreams, a party's glow,

Growing up, the candles grow.


Balloons and songs, the joy they bring,

Adventures wild, on youthful wing.

Growing up, the candles grow,

Birthdays change, a subtle flow.


Adventures wild, on youthful wing,

Friendships solidify and cling.

Birthdays change, a subtle flow,

Life's stages pass, they come and go.


Friendships solidify and cling,

Adult years with a different swing.

Life's stages pass, they come and go,

Once grand celebrations now soft and low.


Adult years with a different swing,

Reflections on the moments' string.

Once grand celebrations now soft and low,

Birthdays fade, a steady undertow.

Comments 0
Loading...