WRITING OBSTACLE

Submitted by Maranda Quinn

Show a powerful emotion – love, grief, rage - in a quiet, everyday moment.

Instead of writing a dramatic and drawn out scene, think about how subtle actions and sensory details can carry the weight of the feeling.

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From outsider’s perspective, I hope they see my gaze onto you as never ending love. They see it as it is pure, innocent and unconditional. My smile becomes real when I see you, even if it’s through the corner of my eye.


I don’t want them to see it as pain, one sided, or influenced. No negativity should be associated when they look at us, but they do so.


I pray one day I’ll be able to look at you again, with the same love from the beginning; and, you’ll be aswell.

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