STORY STARTER
Submitted by Eclipse
Create a story that ends with character saying “I’m not a traitor. I was never on your side.”
mind over matter
i talk to myself sometimes
like i talk to the moon,
talk to my heart through confines
wondering if my time will be soon
my brain doesn’t like me,
so it screams in my head
at things i can’t see
about things i now dread
it screams at my soul
and asks why it’s so dark
those screams take a toll
on my poor locked up heart
it screams at my wrists
and asks why they’re not red
it screams at my fists
to make them purple instead
i wish just for silence
a garden of peace
my poetry timeless
but my body deceased
my mind calls me a hater
while it tells me to hide
and whispers “i’m not a traitor,
i was never on your side”.
-eap<3
Whoahhh! Edgar would faint at the beauty of this poem!! Beautiful 🤩
This poem is so incredible powerful. Your wording and rhymes are absolutely gorgeous. The haunting tone is so incredibly amazing, and the message is completely relatable!
I love this! It flows so well while still showing some big ideas and emotions! Great job! 🙏
I love the flow! The ending was perfection
This is so beautiful