STORY STARTER

Submitted by Eclipse

Create a story that ends with character saying “I’m not a traitor. I was never on your side.”

mind over matter

i talk to myself sometimes

like i talk to the moon,

talk to my heart through confines

wondering if my time will be soon


my brain doesn’t like me,

so it screams in my head

at things i can’t see

about things i now dread


it screams at my soul

and asks why it’s so dark

those screams take a toll

on my poor locked up heart


it screams at my wrists

and asks why they’re not red

it screams at my fists

to make them purple instead


i wish just for silence

a garden of peace

my poetry timeless

but my body deceased


my mind calls me a hater

while it tells me to hide

and whispers “i’m not a traitor,

i was never on your side”.



-eap<3

Comments 17

Whoahhh! Edgar would faint at the beauty of this poem!! Beautiful 🤩

This poem is so incredible powerful. Your wording and rhymes are absolutely gorgeous. The haunting tone is so incredibly amazing, and the message is completely relatable!

I love this! It flows so well while still showing some big ideas and emotions! Great job! 🙏

I love the flow! The ending was perfection

This is so beautiful