A messy room is hardly ever just that
A messy room is indicative of far more than physical disorganization
Messy closet
Messy bed
Messy hair
Messy clothes
Messy relationships
Messy love
Messy happiness
Messy thoughts
Messy head
Messy life
I really like this one (and I say this while sitting in my messy room. Whoops!) Anyways, my feedback is minor and honestly can be taken or left. You start to grow bigger - which is awesome “messy closet” allll the way to “messy clothes” makes total sense. But “messy head” might be smaller than “messy love.” I’m truly searching to be helpful, but the order didn’t take away from the poem at all. I really liked it! 🥳
