STORY STARTER
Write a short story about a family preparing for a special day.
Although you can detail what it is they're preparing for, focus on the family dynamic and interactions of the characters.
STORY STARTER
Write a short story about a family preparing for a special day.
Although you can detail what it is they're preparing for, focus on the family dynamic and interactions of the characters.
Paragraph 1:
My alarm rang loudly*
Alarm, but I can’t*
I got out*
Tired today. I couldn’t even put on clothes*
I felt dizzy and confused*
Fighting my tiredness/exhaustion back*
That was the longest I’ve taken to finish those tasks*
Paragraph 2:
Later, we went to TOYRUS for some toy shopping and headed back to the house. *
My mom replied*
I said hazily. *
Correcte the mistakes and rewrite the rest starting from “I said hazily”
Score: C-