POEM STARTER
Write a poem exploring the feeling of anticipation.
How can you put into poetic form the feelings and consequences of eagerly awaiting something?
POEM STARTER
Write a poem exploring the feeling of anticipation.
How can you put into poetic form the feelings and consequences of eagerly awaiting something?
Absolutely amazing! The metaphors and pacing is perfect and you did such a good job creating an expressive marvel.
This was amazing 👏👏👏I am truly shook. I loved the rope metaphor👏👏👏👏
Wow!! I have no words… this is incredible poetry. It reads like a professional’s writing, in my opinion. A great blend of deep philosophical contemplation on life and imagery to complement it. I especially loved the metaphor of the rope with dreams and responsibilities on either side— I think we all feel as if we are sometimes walking a tightrope between fantasy and reality. Fantabulous writing!! 👏👏👏
I was really interested to read more and more of it, great job!!
your line breaks were interesting in both positive and “negative” ways. occasionally, they would make the pacing awkward. if you take away the few uncomfortable breaks, i think this is great! (also, minor gramatical error- an apostrophe isn’t necessary in “responsibilities”) have a great day!