COMPETITION PROMPT
The creatures danced above us in the clouds as we marvelled at the sky. We had not expected to find a world as amazing as this.
COMPETITION PROMPT
The creatures danced above us in the clouds as we marvelled at the sky. We had not expected to find a world as amazing as this.
I would love to see you turn this into a whole book. I was captivated from the start and I love the style of writing - it reminds me of older authors like Mark Twain. My favorite part about your story is how you don’t reveal exactly what this journey is which leaves it open to interpretation. Personally, I read this from the perspective of an addict and how it feels to get high. You either wake up to the illusion that drugs bring you happiness and start to see the truth. Wonderful work, Benjamin.