Rebirth
New dawns bloom each year,
Filling spaces in ourselves,
Luminating dreams,
Releasing the sap inside,
Giving birth to a new us.
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New dawns bloom each year,
Filling spaces in ourselves,
Luminating dreams,
Releasing the sap inside,
Giving birth to a new us.
Thank you Sue. It was great fun to try.
I love the nature imagery
Thank you :) it’s interesting you pick out the tree and the flower separately. I was more thinking about how nature is renewed in a cycle, and probably over-ambitiously trying to compare it to how relationships seem to also work in cycles. Thank you for your feedback, I will definitely give it some thought.
This is really good. I love the imagery of nature. Maybe you could try to stick to one element of nature rather than the tree and the flower. Overall, really good.
