Lonely Together
Lovers,
Once together
Never apart
Endlessly,
Lying bare
Youthful,
Time,
Once lonely
Gains someone
Eternally,
Time,
Holding hostage
Endlessly,
Remember.
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Lovers,
Once together
Never apart
Endlessly,
Lying bare
Youthful,
Time,
Once lonely
Gains someone
Eternally,
Time,
Holding hostage
Endlessly,
Remember.
I enjoyed the structure of this poem; the way I had to pause. It allowed me to paint a picture of young breathless love. The second stanza takes a darker tone with “holding hostage.” I recommend going deeper into how young relationships can constrict or how it feels to hold another forever.
