Actually it says smeared from mouth to cheek to evoke the vision of a somewhat playful sexual experience, I don’t think your description above regarding the joker would be a popular visual amongst other readers. As for the other criticism I understand what you mean and made changes accordingly.

Paints a vivid picture of this woman. I would have a re-think about the lipstick comment as this conjures images of Heath Ledger’s joker; you wouldn’t have lipstick going up to your cheek. Also would put a “Not” in front of innocent as it currently says she is innocent but not sinful, when you then go on to say she is in between