WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a poem about the sea that does not use the words
Deep,
Blue,
Shimmering,
Cold.
Synonyms and creativity will help you find ways to convey the enormousness and beauty of the ocean without using these common descriptors.
Freezing
The bottomless abyss they call an ocean
Lay a warm blanket over with motion
Covering my body and snow with heat
Deception it was, down to my feet
I lay in the bitter, frosty and frigid
Brought me down to it's freezing depths it did
My body so warm it's rigid
The end.....
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