STORY STARTER
Inspired by Adelaide T. Everett
Two teachers fall in love, but their work may get in the way of a serious relationship.
STORY STARTER
Inspired by Adelaide T. Everett
Two teachers fall in love, but their work may get in the way of a serious relationship.
This reminds me of being young… This work is lovely :)
I love the names first of all, very creative! I was confused by the scenario with the bark. I’m assuming it was some kind of divination but I found it hard to picture the bark itself, what was causing it to move? The second thing I noticed was that your voice and prose seemed somewhat inconsistent. It sounded as if half of you wanted to write with a high-fantasy tone and the other half wanted to remain more conversational. Overall it was very creative and I think you did a good job building the scenario itself!
Not the ending I was expecting :-)