VISUAL PROMPT
by Florentina Amon @ deviantart.com/Tiina23.

Use this imagine as inspiration for a story or poem.
VISUAL PROMPT
by Florentina Amon @ deviantart.com/Tiina23.
Use this imagine as inspiration for a story or poem.
Thank you so much, Butterfly Queen! π
I think the others said it all.
But what they did not say was my opinion. I LOVED IT!!!!!!β€οΈππππ€π
Thanks Nathan and Ian! π
I will look into it and edit what I can later. Thanks for the feedback! π
Interesting use of juxtaposition in this. One statement is following by another that contradicts it. Itβs done well to show the double standards the character is experiencing.
As Patroclus mentions some tightening of punctuation would be good. You can make use of the different punctuations, I think, to elevate how the two statements contradict rach other.
Beautifully written with powerful words. I love how it emphasises the vulnerability of the character.