POEM STARTER
Submitted by Freddie
Life Without You
Write a poem or short story about what life would be like without the person you care about the most.
POEM STARTER
Submitted by Freddie
Life Without You
Write a poem or short story about what life would be like without the person you care about the most.
Lovely poem. Grief and memory are the top things I tend to write about, so I was immediately drawn in to your piece. “Memories float through my mind clouded by fear” the weight and depth is so vivid here. As someone who has suffered from memory loss, this line just felt so accurate to me. Well done. My tiny note would be to remove the “…” at the end and shift “even in death” to be its own line. I think it might better and more clearly serve your purpose. Again, lovely work :)