WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe a common scene (like a busy street or quiet park) in a way that evokes a specific emotion (e.g., loneliness, joy) without explicitly stating the emotion.

Use sensory details and imagery to convey the mood.

strangers on the subway

Back home, surrounded by strangers. In the city where I grew up, so many people I don’t know. Old friends all gone, living somewhere else, only home for Christmas. But who am I to judge, I’m not home any more often. I avoid the heavy blanket of anonymity as well. I stand in a crowded place, squeezed from every side. The subway doors open and close ceaselessly, letting people in and throwing others out. So many stops, so many places that felt familiar a long time ago. Now there’s other people standing at the station, not a single face I’d possibly recognise. Strangers all around me in a city that once felt like mine. And in the middle of this crowded subway I realise that I’ve become nothing but a stranger too.

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