STORY STARTER
Write a short story set at a carnival.
Whether it is a fantastical, magical carnival, or just a lovely day out, this vibrant setting offers interesting descriptions and plots.
STORY STARTER
Write a short story set at a carnival.
Whether it is a fantastical, magical carnival, or just a lovely day out, this vibrant setting offers interesting descriptions and plots.
Saturday morning + ☕️ with 🍪 + B Rosser Story = ✨😃✨
✨✨✨sparkling intro paragraph: “Monsterous horses…lace curtains drawn tight.”✨✨✨
How about something like: “Flakes of straw sprayed out in glistening confetti…”
Great line!: “All who desired it were welcome; the only rule was: Have fun.” (I must also lift my hat to such a wonderful use of punctuation! As you know I’m punctuation-disabled!)😁
This description is so lyrical and like a dream song, starting with: “Hung in swooping festoons…” and going to: “…although most items on display were not cut out for eating.” All of my senses took that in! Lovely!
Some beast stole an ‘r’!: “Eager village(r)s queued behind…”
💀🍎💀!
That beast is now exchanging letters!: “Figures stood of (on) stages of stone…”
How about more of a visual here (Dede is a master at this!):
Red fire…
White doves…
And long…
Snaking vines…
Would burst from magically (magically from) their fingertips.”
I’m glad I visited the Carnival De Nevis safely from my couch!
A fun, creative,a well-written romp!😃😊
Not happy with this piece, but I finally managed to finish (ish) something, and a bad post is better than no post, I guess 🫣😂