WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a description of the feeling of drifting off to sleep.

You could use metaphorical or poetic language, or you could use comparisons and contrast to describe this feeling.

Drifting Away

A deep breath.

Warm air escaping from parted lips.

Cool sheets beneath bare skin.

Sinking.

Sinking deeper into the mattress.

Eyelids heavy.

Inhale…hold…exhale.

Thoughts pause.

Rain tapping against window glass.

Thunder rumbling in the distance.

Drifting off.

Drifting away.

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AveryD

I’m trying to get back to writing more. My muse has been on an extended vacation, but I’m happy to feel inspired to write again. Before I wrote romance and some urban fantasy. I would like to explore other genres now.