WRITING OBSTACLE

Describe a character's physical appearance through the eyes of someone who feels intense jealousy for them.

How accurate would the description be when tainted by strong emotion?

That stupid bitch

My pencil grinds into the page infront of me as my eyes trace the perfect details of her face. A twist of nauseuous agony knots in my stomach with each of her strides into the classroom. Her dress seems to billow in the non-existant breeze, adding more to her transcending perfection. My eyes pierce into hers, her gaze lingering on the other students, captivated by her presence. I see through her pink lips, curled into a smirk. I see through her rosy cheeks and mesmerizing eyes. I see her for what she truly is. And what she is - I will never be.

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