WRITING OBSTACLE

submitted by Pomegranate Necromancer

Create a scene where your character is fleeing from something dangerous.

How will you create pace, atmosphere and tension in this single scene?

The Catacomb Chase

Huff huff the running woman breathed . Wind blowing in and out her lungs . Tap tap the monster follows behind. The scent of death follows the monster . She slows her breathes as not to be heard . She cries tears of fear no no I don’t want it to get me please no she said covering her mouth . The walls of bone scratch her skin .
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