STORY STARTER
Your protagonist is a guest at a dinner party where they feel extremely uncomfortable.
Try to subtly reveal the cause of their discomfort through dialogue, actions, and thoughts, instead of outright narrating it.
Guest
Stomach turned coughing and splattering.
Tangy taste in the mouth inbeween worlds
Queasy stomach
Sickness
Acidic breath
Pale eyes, red heart face flush
Trembling arms and legs
Blood in the eyes
Lack of appetite
shivering sensation
Deathly quiet
Something wet underneath
Suspicious
Feeling of dread
The stitch
The stench miasma
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