WRITING OBSTACLE
Write a story that unfolds in reverse order.
Begin with the ending and work backwards, revealing how the final situation came to be.
Remorse Or Salvation
Her tears fell in ravenous storms, blurring the ground with a dying ache. Clear rivers mixed with tanged, bitter blood- yet it looked so tantalizing still. It was marvelous, yet a horrifying scene that I wished I would never lay my eyes on again. It was good, yet bad all the same. In my mind, I couldn’t help but wonder how it had come to be this way. What had provoked our end, what about our beginning? Light was simply a distant memory, a tear in the gentle fabric of what was once us, was once affection, was once care. Now, it simply was replaced by a cold, sheer, unrelenting wind current that threatened to blow me off the cold cliff we stood on. Or, to phrase it more realistically; the cliff I stood on, the cliff I killed her on- the cliff she died on. It was a sad sight, truly. A bitter end to our love song. Though, I should’ve expected this from the beginning, I knew. I has been played a fool. Happy cheers and celebrations felt like dreams, a sickening, horrible dream. Or maybe ‘‘twas the reality I lived in- I knew not. A red, crimson balloon- much like the blood that soaked the crumbling hill- much like the blood that swam around my black-laced shoes- had been both our end, and our beginning. This I knew more than my very breaths, more than my guilt. I’d killed her.