WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a scene where time behaves unusually (e.g., slows down, speeds up, or jumps).

Convey how this time manipulation affects the environment and the unfolding events.

Glitch

She was dying in my arms

Just laying there dying

Raising a hand to hold her close

But now I held a baby?


Not the girl I’d once loved

But it was, her I mean

In the beginning

Before I loved her


Smiling and looking back at her again

A preteen? She was now a young girl

Her eyes warm and sweet with a smile

I imagine this would have been our daughter


Blinking for a second and the preteen has changed

Sixteen? She was now sixteen

Old enough to drive she had keys in her hand


I focus my eyes on her, and she changed

One last time

She was now, the girl id loved

A beautiful 26 year old with hope dying in her eyes


I held her close wish time would just stop

Little did I know it had

Some magical power had given me time to grow up with my love

But it is time to let go now, because Time had run out

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