STORY STARTER
Write a story that centres around playing a game.
STORY STARTER
Write a story that centres around playing a game.
Thank you guys for the encouragement and feedback, I really appreciate it 💖
I think This is really good! Good job💋🫶
It’s a really good story, and I enjoyed reading it! However, there were a few places when a comma could’ve been used. For example, “Lounging in the living room throwing about suggestions of what to do.” For this particular quote, I would also recommend saying something like ‘we were’ to make it more clear (and in this scenario, I’d put the comma after room and before throwing). And there are some parts that aren’t as clear as others to me (such as “the top of the top), but that could just be me. Anyway, it’s really creative and a great story. Keep up the good work!