WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a story where the protagonist only says the same ten words but can rearrange them differently.

Think carefully about the selection of these ten words and what the protagonist may be able to articulate with them.

Do I Have No Original Thought In My Head?

“Do I have no original thought in my head?”

Said the butterfly, flittering onto my brow.

“Do I have no original thought in my head?”

These alone were the nine words his mouth would allow.


For variety, sometimes, he’d switch it around:

“In my head no original thought do I have?”

But again, only nine words he spoke. Now I frowned.

“In my head no original thought do I have?”


Did he wish me to answer? What could I reply?

If the answer was “yes”, how could he understand?

If the answer was “no”, wherefore was it that I

Was the one addressee he discovered at hand?


But rebuffing quick answer, I pondered the query,

Deceptively simple, yet hard to unpack.

Did an answer elude me? He seemed in a hurry

To flitter to brows having far greater knack.


“Do I have no original thought in my head?”

Did he ask it again, or did I ask it for him?

Does no one have original thought in his head?

What’s original thought? Nearly did I implore him.


But off he goes, fluttering. Where, I can’t guess.

“Do I have an original thought in my head?”

Hark! A tenth word he speaks! Is it “no”? Is it “yes”?

He is too far, alas! I can’t hear what he said.

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