VISUAL PROMPT
Photo by Nick Scott @ instagram.com/freetheseagulls

Write a story set on this misty path.
VISUAL PROMPT
Photo by Nick Scott @ instagram.com/freetheseagulls
Write a story set on this misty path.
Freedom! I love it! As a someone who wears sandals in the winter (because freezing temperatures and basic common sense can’t hold me down) I can relate to this protagonist!
“I had already loosened my corset and slipped on my leather boots…” is a great sprinkle of info. You accomplish several things with a quick visual jab.
On to feedback! There’s not a whole lot that needs pruning. Careful of tense switching “Mother screamed” “…I did look back” and “I saw her” might all need to be present tense. The last thing is a minor detail - “As I look up…I see an infinite world ahead of me.” To look upwards and see what’s ahead of you is a bit awkward. I’d suggest either looking out (at the scenery in front of the protagonist) or looking up and imagining the world. It’s a small detail but could help keep your readers in it with you.
Happy writing to you!