WRITING OBSTACLE

Write a dual point-of-view scene in which the right part of the brain and the left are disagreeing about a topic.

Think about the characteristics associated with each side.

Controlling?

I can see her making faces at me from the corner of my eye, trying to get my attention. Instead of looking, I keep my eyes forward and focused on driving.


“Look at me!” She yells.****

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**NOBODY gets to talk to me that way.**


_She was just joking, chill._

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**No, that’s not okay. She doesn’t get to tell me what to do.**


_She’s my friend. I know that she doesn’t mean it like that._

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**NO. Now if I do it, I’m letting her control me.**


_I need to let go of my pride. This isn’t anything to feel forced about._

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**That crossed a line. She shouldn’t talk to me like that. She is not in charge of me. I don’t have to do what she says.**

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_Okay, now I’m overreacting. If I ignore her, it’ll be rude because we’re just hanging out._

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**Screw her. She deserves to be ignored!**


_I’m going to look at her. I know she didn’t mean to sound controlling._

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**I’m going to glare at her so she knows she doesn’t get to talk to me like that.**

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I look over at her, glaring.

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